Is this worth working on?

[Jeff]

www.savefile.com/files/4035145

It's just a tiny file, just a bit of the chorus, no instrumentation to speak of: voice, piano, and drum. What is your opinion? Is this worth any effort at all. Or is it a brain fart? I was up late with nothing to do and I kinda just plinked this out. I like it, I think.

Don't we get on?
Don't we have a lot in common?
Don't we have fun?

[Cavern Club Announcer 1963]

Ladies and gentlemen, please allow me to introduce John, Paul, George, Jeffrey McBride, and Rrrrrrrringo! The five Beatles!

[Thanin]

I agree that it is very Beatles like, but that doesn't mean it couldnt be worked on more. Not every song has to be a finished product and building a song that may not ultimately work can help your creative mind to work through what its trying to express. This can be a great process to improving future songs.